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Openness and The Lack There Of
What do you really know about me?
Who I am and what I want?
You nod your heads and say you understand,
But it’s that reaction that gets me mad.
“You’ll get to do what you want in a few years”, you say,
But will there ever come a day
That you don’t look over my shoulder to see, criticize,
To chastise a decision I make?
You have raised me right,
So then why do I have to fight
For everything I want and believe in?
I just want to be like everyone else here
You know I didn’t shed a tear when you left?
I was happy for the freedom,
Freed to make my own decisions,
But you come at me with, “That’s wrong” and, “That’s not safe”.
You went to college years ago
You don’t know what it’s like today.
The openness like a large grassy field
This is exactly how I’m supposed to feel.
Free to do as I please and go boldly now
And somehow
That the opposite of what college is supposed to be.
Keep your head in the books
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Ifs
If I had changed my path I would not have been met you.
I had seen you for years.
Silent and keeping to yourself.
Beautiful in all shape and form.
You wouldn’t believe me now if I told you now,
But you’ve always been in my head.
We saw each other pass by the other every day for years
But we never said a word.
Fear tensed me up as the years went on.
Fear of hate and rejection.
Fear turned a blind eye.
What I failed to see was that you too were in pain.
We were one of the same.
If I had changed my path I would not have met you.
I don’t know if you believe in fate but after meeting you, I do now.
And all it took was saying one word.
A word that people take for granted and don’t understand its true value.
Something so simple but something so hard to say.
If I had not walked the way to class that I did…
If I had turned my head away from your glance…
If I had not waved back to you…
If I had not said hi…
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Missed.
We walked to the rock. Far off from camp, far off from campers, far off from everyone. Our own seclusion.
We sat and talked. Our troubles and worries melted away when we were together. No judgment about our pasts. Only hope for our future together, but that future would never happen. We knew what would happen when we went home, but that didn't mean anything in the here and now.
Close together now. Face to face. So close, oh so close. The fear held us back from the sweet delight of a kiss. Fear of acceptance. Quick to turn away, the moment missed and never to happen again. Conversation turned awkward, dead silence in the midst.
A long walk back to camp. Small talk to past the time. Now our fear wasn't acceptance but regret. Regret that the best moment that we could have had was missed. Now we will never know what would have started on that rock. Far off from camp, far off from campers, far off from everyone. We walked back to camp.
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Forever Ago RussiaXReader Chapter 2
--A few months before you went to the castle.--
"Ivan," you say timidly.
"Da?" he said.
"Can I stay with you forever?" you ask as a blush covers your face. You wring your hands and look down at your feet. Ivan has been the greatest thing that has happened you; you can never imagine living anywhere else but with him.
Ivan smiled and pulled you in close to his broad chest. "Of course my sunflower, you are my everything________." You hug Ivan back knowing nothing bad could happen if you just stay in his arms.
"I think I should sell the shop…" Ivan says catching you by surprise.
"Why?! You love this shop so much. Why would you sell it?" You say in a panic.
"Because I love you more than this shop, that's why. I'll use the money to buy a house for us in the country. Away from everyone, away from the king. He won't bother us anymore that way." The last part he said in scorn. The king that has been ruling the land has brought nothing but despair and poverty to the kingdom. Ivan hated the king
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Forever Ago RussiaXReader Chapter 1
You sit in your room dying from boredom. Your quote on quote Prince Charming has left you, yet again, to go play video games and eat hamburgers with his bros. You slowly get up slowly because your butt is so numb from sitting. After a couple of unbalanced steps you lazily walked to your window to look outside. You check the clock.
'10 o' clock. Perfect.' You thought.
You look back through the window and caught sight of the liquor store light turn off. A man stepped out of the entrance and locks the door. You let out a sigh as the tall man walked away whistling a tune.
You hear the door open as you gaze out of your window, catching the last glimpse of your wishful love. You turn around to see Alfred throwing his coat and gaming devices on the chair near the door.
"______ you should have been there I whooped both of your step brothers' butts at HALO!" Alfred said cheerfully. You groan because you know you'll never hear the end of it from your step brothers, France and England. Alfred get
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Hidden in The Snow Iceland X Reader
       Isn't it a little late to be going sightseeing, not to mention a little cold? Where are we even going?” The sun was already gone for the day and a strong, bone chilling wind appeared in its absence. Though you were dressed in layer upon layer of clothing, you couldn't seem to get warm. What annoyed you most of all was the fact that Iceland had initially asked you to come with him, wherever he was going, and now he wasn't speaking. “Iceland.” You called his name in a sing song voice over and over, hoping he'd decide to answer you. “Iceland, why aren't you talking to me?”
Finally, he spoke, cutting you off before you could say his name again. “Because I was thinking.” After giving his short explanation, he fell silent again, trudging through the thick snow with a stern expression on his face.
Awkwardness crept between the two of you as everything went silent. “What were you thinking about? We aren't lost out here,
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Well let's do this again. After two years, lots of emotions and school, I'm starting over. I'm going to so this over and work on my writing again. Gosh it's been so long since I've written for fun, but let's see where this goes. DA helped me get through a lot back then when I was a mess, let's see if two years, emotional stability, and a hell of a lot more maturity has changed anything. 

Here's to new beginnings,
DoBetter2105
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No problem! :D thanks for the hard work and the llama badge! ^_^
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Thankya alot for the fave! ^^ a bunch! :iconfluttershyyayplz:
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no problem! thanks for the great work!
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Yusu! Ill do my best with mah work! :D
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